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PostSubject: Scary Stories Thread Make Your Own   Sun May 31, 2009 9:07 pm

Pretty much you just make a scary story post it here and others comment on it.

its not for people to comment on grammar or spelling

just comment on the story itself.

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PostSubject: Re: Scary Stories Thread Make Your Own   Sun May 31, 2009 10:21 pm

I can't do scary stories but I'll try soon....
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PostSubject: Re: Scary Stories Thread Make Your Own   Mon Jun 01, 2009 12:19 am

this should be on the fan-fics thread.

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PostSubject: Re: Scary Stories Thread Make Your Own   Mon Jun 01, 2009 8:26 am

it is on the fan-fic thread
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PostSubject: Re: Scary Stories Thread Make Your Own   Mon Jun 01, 2009 5:17 pm

that's cos i moved it...XD

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PostSubject: Re: Scary Stories Thread Make Your Own   Tue Jun 09, 2009 7:39 am

A girl named Mary walked home every day with two of her friends named Greg And Connie. everyday they pass the old Selburg house. rumor has it that 60years ago Mary the wife of the house caught her husband Greg cheating on her with the neighbor Connie while their daughter was at school and killed them both then grief stricken committed suicide.

A few years later some poor unfortunate girl who wandered into the house on a dare was reported seen running out of the house screaming:

"I CANT BELIEVE IT HE CHEATED ON ME I THOUGHT WE WOULD BE HAPPY"

when the cops caught her she screamed, thrashed wildly, cursed, and spit at them. she got away and went into her house and killed her father, brother, pets,and left a note saying: I'll kill them all. men are unfaithful so they must be assimilated. i've gotten one house and now i'm off to the next.

it continued like this for months and every time the house was left in the same condition practically painted red and male free. after all the men in the neighborhood were killed, missing, or evacuated. every thing changed now all the women started burning pictures of men on their lawns at midnight chanting.

"TO THE GREAT SPIRIT OF THE FREER MARY! WE OFFER YOU THE SOULS OF ALL OUR MEN! TAKE THEM INTO THE UNDERWORLD WHERE THEY BELONG!"

the girl who'd been possessed went back into the Selburg house and killed herself in the tradition of Mary Selburg. a note was left along side her body, it said: "I will return for more souls soon enough. Don not forget me for i'll be back."

(Back to Mary and friends) Greg wanted to ask Connie out and thought Mary would be in the way so he dared her to enter the Selburg home. she went up to the door step and felt an evil presence but she knew she'd never live it down if she chickened out.

the second she entered the house and moved a few steps in she heard a scream. terrified she turned for the door and it slammed shut in her face and it locked. she grabbed the handle and yanked on it violently it wouldn't budge. she ran to the nearest window and tried to open it...no luck. she picked up a chair and hurled it into the window. the chair shattered and a large shard went flying back at her and pinned her against a wall by her heart.

"Please dont let me die! please" she cried "GREG! CONNIE!" she tried to call but because of the shard she couldn't do more then just whisper.
trough her tears and sobbing she realized everything had stopped a crow flying by the window stuck in mid air. she saw a white figure that became clearer by the second it was the ghost of Mary Selburg she drew closer to Mary still crying in fear of death and said.

"You poor thing your friends have left you here to perish just so they could create a relationship. same thing that happened to me so long ago look at them"-she pulled Mary from the wall then brought Mary to the window Mary realized she wasn't dead but just angry they were kissing when time stopped, something looked off about them-"do you see now they wanted you gone for that." she pointed to the frozen couple. Mary looked closely at them and realized that the were walking away.

the outrage Mary felt went rolling off her in waves of hatred.she looked at the ghost and asked how she could get back at them for it. the ghost told her to go into the kitchen and Mary obeyed. she crossed the room and the ghost flew into her. she was possessed. The Marys grabbed a large knife and walked out side. time continued and her friends were finishing their interrupted step. Greg looked back and notices that Mary was there and said

"OH! How did you get there i was coming in for you in a minute or two"

"Oh really Gregory. then why are both of your bodies turned to leave?"

"um..just so i ... so we could..." he couldn't answer her.

"YOU WERE GONNA LEAVE ME IN THERE ALONE TO DIE!" she shrieked at them. they were both to dumbstruck by her tone to say any thing. some thing Mary had said finally registered with Connie.

"wait you said die. how?"

"are you kidding me just look at me!" for the first time they both noticed her appearance and said nothing.

she was bone pale, her eyes glowed white, her shirt had a hole in it that was rimmed with blood, there was a hole in her body that some one could fit their arm through.her hand was behind her back so they couldn't see the knife.

"Mary what happened to you?!!" they both said while backing away.

"What happened to me? What happened to me?! I'LL TELL YOU WHAT HAPPENED TO ME I DIED IN THERE!" she pulled out the knife and stabbed Greg in the chest "and now you will too."-she pulled it out and liked it tasting his blood, she turned to Connie who was backing away-" Don't even think about it Connie i'll catch you. Your next anyway." she said in an even tone while staring at the knife.

Connie ran and Mary threw the knife it caught her in the left side if her back (behind the heart).

*******
the next day Mary arrived at school with a smile, no hole in her chest, face back to normal, and when the teachers and students asked if she knew where Greg and Connie were she faked innocence and said nope.

that day when she got home she wrote a note in her note book and left forever. the note said: "To the parents of Mary Selburg's latest victims. i told you not to forget me. to my latest vessel congratulations on a job well done."
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PostSubject: Re: Scary Stories Thread Make Your Own   Tue Jun 09, 2009 8:16 am

sorry its long Mad
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PostSubject: Re: Scary Stories Thread Make Your Own   Tue Jun 09, 2009 8:21 am

It was confusing, but good! KILLING >D
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PostSubject: Re: Scary Stories Thread Make Your Own   Tue Jun 09, 2009 8:34 am

not really. i think i can sum it up

a woman finds her husband cheating and kills him then herself. she thinks men are ungrateful so she kills them even after death. she chooses to use little girls for vessels as her way of bringing the family together. to her its like her daughter is avenging her. the town's
women killing their men is just because she kinda prayed on their insecurities and weakness to make them think like her. like a mass possesion.

this new girl is her newest vessel the fact that they were named after the couple was a coincidence or was it?



really was it? i wrote it but i forgot i think it was reincarnation.
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PostSubject: Re: Scary Stories Thread Make Your Own   Tue Jun 09, 2009 8:38 am

Oh now it makes more sense XD
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PostSubject: Re: Scary Stories Thread Make Your Own   Tue Jun 09, 2009 8:39 am

you try it.

i have alot on acc i just bring them here and uncensor them
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PostSubject: Re: Scary Stories Thread Make Your Own   Tue Jun 09, 2009 8:45 am

I would, but I suck at scary stories. XD
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PostSubject: Re: Scary Stories Thread Make Your Own   Tue Jun 09, 2009 8:51 am

its not hard. just take a normal thing and add the element of fear.

i have a story on ACC that has an immortal woman in the forest eating people...raw. no utensils needed.

not that hard but the under story is that she was betrayed and cant find happiness until she receives genuine love from someone. i've got

14 parts to it now and none are tiny.
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PostSubject: Re: Scary Stories Thread Make Your Own   Tue Jun 09, 2009 9:11 am

I'll try...XD

Fifty years ago, Mobodoon was a tranquil place where everything was free for everyone. Everything was perfect, until Jinx came to the town. She was a possessed teen who had one goal in mind-Kill everyone in the city. Jinx went from country to country, killing and destroying the every city until nothing was left. She was about to eliminate her first victim when another though came to mind. She decided she would take over the city instead of ruining it. In a weeks time, she fulfilled her dream. She was the mayor of Mobodoon, and earned that title by working her way as vice mayor, and then killing her boss.

She has five kids, who would take over after her death. Twenty years later, Jinx was poisoned by her first born. That daughter, Blaire ruled for three years, when suddenly, along with her three other siblings, "disappeared." The youngest of the five had killed them all, just so she could reign. She was the worst of them all. She made the nobles pay 1,000 a day, and if they didn't, they would be turned into robots, along with anyone who didn't follow her rules. She was known as Glaceon the Infamous.

A group of rebel teenagers rose up against her. They were known as Freedom Fighters. When they hacked into her mansion, she killed them instantly with her icicle powers. The town's only hope was gone. The rest of the Freedom Fighters were killed, along with everyone who agreed with their ways. She saw that her kingdom was getting smaller. She took over the rest of the world, and made half of them robot servants. Soon Glaceon became depressed and crazy. She started to eat those in her way, instead of turning them into robots. One day, she lost all of her saneness. She ate everyone, and turned her robots into humans again. Those were to be her new people. Glaceon was killed years later by a servant, who then took her place, but he ended up killing everyone himself.

Afterwards, he committed suicide.

That was dumb. XD I watch way too much Sonic Underground.
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PostSubject: Re: Scary Stories Thread Make Your Own   Tue Jun 09, 2009 9:36 am

thats interesting. i like it. murder is the cure for every thing Suspect
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PostSubject: Re: Scary Stories Thread Make Your Own   Tue Jun 09, 2009 9:59 am

Indeed it is...XD
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PostSubject: Re: Scary Stories Thread Make Your Own   Tue Jun 09, 2009 8:16 pm

Mobodoon is off of sonic underground. XD (i don't watch it, i watched it as a child)

no swearing in stories please. the censor is being made tonight so replace words.

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PostSubject: Re: Scary Stories Thread Make Your Own   Tue Jun 09, 2009 9:00 pm

how? i posted that yesterday i cant see an edit button
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PostSubject: Re: Scary Stories Thread Make Your Own   Tue Jun 09, 2009 9:04 pm

George you set the edit time. You can edit now Ahseya

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PostSubject: Re: Scary Stories Thread Make Your Own   Tue Jun 09, 2009 9:12 pm

huh? i never did, you must've done! but never mind.

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PostSubject: Re: Scary Stories Thread Make Your Own   Tue Jun 09, 2009 9:14 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Scary Stories Thread Make Your Own   Tue Jun 09, 2009 9:18 pm

anyway... back on topic.

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PostSubject: Re: Scary Stories Thread Make Your Own   Tue Jun 09, 2009 9:38 pm

BETTER?
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PostSubject: Re: Scary Stories Thread Make Your Own   Tue Jun 09, 2009 10:12 pm

yes...thanks for doing that. it's just caution incase younger people join and see those words.

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PostSubject: Re: Scary Stories Thread Make Your Own   Tue Jun 09, 2009 10:20 pm

i tried to keep it clean-ish but that wont work
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